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Bajó por las escaleras de concreto, no le gustaban las mecánicas. Las recorrió con agilidad esquivando a los viejitos y a las madres con los niños aferrados a sus manos que enlentecían el tráfico, casi podía hacerlo con los ojos cerrados. Cuando llegó abajo, notó que no había el volumen normal de gente que había todas las mañanas en el andén, por lo cual dedujo que el tren acababa de partir. Esto la dejaba con una espera de 7 minutos por delante. Se resignó a esperar, apoyada en la pared, fijó su vista lejos. El andén de enfrente también estaba medio vacío, lo recorrió con la vista, un poco aburrida, todavía con las manos sudadas.

Cuando lo vio, el corazón le dio un brinco. Allí estaba él parado en el andén contrario, cerca del borde. Alto, desgarbado, vestido de bluejean y franela blanca, con un morral al hombro y sandalias de cuero. Estaba distraído, su mirada se paseaba sin rumbo hasta que la vio. Las rodillas le temblaron. La reconoció de inmediato, estaba recostada de la pared, los cabellos alborotados y la mirada líquida, submarina. Se miraron en silencio, no había nada que decir a esa distancia. La franja amarilla que separaba a ambos andenes los separaba también a ellos, además de los rieles y el ruido. Decía claramente NO PASE, como si las miradas se pudieran detener. El tiempo hizo trampa y se estiró mientras ellos se miraban, se medían, se reconocían asombrados. El labio inferior de ella comenzó a temblar y las lágrimas rodaron calientes por su cara cayendo en los dedos de sus pies. A él se le acalambró una pierna y el corazón le latía a un ritmo loco e improvisado.

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